This definitely on a good track. The plug looks enormous, so you need to think about scale. Also, the images that are being shown. Not that I don't like a couple of hot ladies in cowboy hats, but it sort of makes storytelling idea seem a little more superficial, when you want people to reflect a bit more. Think about what images might make your point about storytelling (not that they have to be overly-poignant, but really nice shots would just be more compelling as a design)
I assume that the couple is sitting on the back of a car or something? I don't mind the abstraction, but you might want to indicate more that it's the back of a car or something.
I like the ideas that these images would just be floating around in there and then come forward periodically. You might want to think about doing a simple animation (with music) to get the full affect (even a stop motion would be fine) - we can talk about that more later.
This definitely on a good track. The plug looks enormous, so you need to think about scale. Also, the images that are being shown. Not that I don't like a couple of hot ladies in cowboy hats, but it sort of makes storytelling idea seem a little more superficial, when you want people to reflect a bit more. Think about what images might make your point about storytelling (not that they have to be overly-poignant, but really nice shots would just be more compelling as a design)
ReplyDeleteI assume that the couple is sitting on the back of a car or something? I don't mind the abstraction, but you might want to indicate more that it's the back of a car or something.
I like the ideas that these images would just be floating around in there and then come forward periodically. You might want to think about doing a simple animation (with music) to get the full affect (even a stop motion would be fine) - we can talk about that more later.