Olivia, I really like the progress that you have made to these spreads. The blue ones are so much stronger and I love the way that you crossed out the "lost." It helps to get the point across with still leaving a little bit of mystery about the story. I also love the description spread with the leash in the middle. It makes a really interesting composition. I think the title page could use a little more work though, I think it can be tweaked a bit to better match the inside spreads. -Tiffany
Wow, I can't really decide which spread I like better! The first one I really like both dogs. and I like the "lost" crossed out. My only concern is that the title is getting drowned out by the big type of lost pup. The second I really like how the text is set up and that image goes over both pages... however I'm concerned how the title is going to look once the booklet is folded. Also.. overall I think the blue is too dark to have black text.. maybe switch to white? Cover: I really like it, nothing really to say but that the text needs to line up better.
Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI really like the progress that you have made to these spreads. The blue ones are so much stronger and I love the way that you crossed out the "lost." It helps to get the point across with still leaving a little bit of mystery about the story. I also love the description spread with the leash in the middle. It makes a really interesting composition. I think the title page could use a little more work though, I think it can be tweaked a bit to better match the inside spreads.
-Tiffany
Wow, I can't really decide which spread I like better!
ReplyDeleteThe first one I really like both dogs. and I like the "lost" crossed out. My only concern is that the title is getting drowned out by the big type of lost pup.
The second I really like how the text is set up and that image goes over both pages... however I'm concerned how the title is going to look once the booklet is folded.
Also.. overall I think the blue is too dark to have black text.. maybe switch to white?
Cover: I really like it, nothing really to say but that the text needs to line up better.